tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-111850089604071163.post1852384490760769895..comments2023-05-03T08:04:46.696-07:00Comments on Peaceful Pandemonium: Magpie TalesBusiness IQhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03383555340302028043noreply@blogger.comBlogger29125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-111850089604071163.post-15421360272148452852010-10-25T06:29:20.131-07:002010-10-25T06:29:20.131-07:00Depression can be like bricks on the soul...very d...Depression can be like bricks on the soul...very devestating...you captured it well in your words.Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-111850089604071163.post-33699412073496407452010-10-24T19:36:47.077-07:002010-10-24T19:36:47.077-07:00yes, it is a well written poem with an opening lin...yes, it is a well written poem with an opening line that begs for more... not to be disappointed true to the last line... <a href="http://pieceofpie.wordpress.com/2010/10/24/rainy-curtain/" rel="nofollow">rainy curtain</a>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-111850089604071163.post-44960997471765446502010-10-23T23:48:39.582-07:002010-10-23T23:48:39.582-07:00Depression can take a while to pass but the thing ...Depression can take a while to pass but the thing to always remember is that it can & does pass!<br />This was a very brave & honest Magpie and something I am sure that many of your readers may be able to relate to on some level.Katherinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05667997972741557676noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-111850089604071163.post-58013739362985032010-10-23T10:35:28.619-07:002010-10-23T10:35:28.619-07:00..it takes a while to see past it...this line reso.....it takes a while to see past it...this line resonates within me..very nice, self-reflective writeClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-111850089604071163.post-72739613877173109192010-10-23T03:57:03.427-07:002010-10-23T03:57:03.427-07:00nice. the repitition in the end adds much to the f...nice. the repitition in the end adds much to the feeling in this the hardness in getting through the feelings of depression...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-111850089604071163.post-62552384819525321112010-10-22T10:05:23.023-07:002010-10-22T10:05:23.023-07:00Very well captured. It is true that depression is...Very well captured. It is true that depression isn't really talked about. Sad.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-111850089604071163.post-39636036232424759782010-10-22T06:53:02.895-07:002010-10-22T06:53:02.895-07:00Interesting word play here. Nice Mag. Love and Lig...Interesting word play here. Nice Mag. Love and Light, SenderAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-111850089604071163.post-33738769514132350682010-10-22T06:11:44.659-07:002010-10-22T06:11:44.659-07:00creative word play,
you made it,
powerful imagery ...creative word play,<br />you made it,<br />powerful imagery flashes into mind along the lines.<br />cool magpie.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-111850089604071163.post-70986203602629548092010-10-22T04:46:05.246-07:002010-10-22T04:46:05.246-07:00Very truly stated..I could feel this..Very truly stated..I could feel this..Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11985979258848310351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-111850089604071163.post-22481271256215644662010-10-21T16:27:17.836-07:002010-10-21T16:27:17.836-07:00A beautifully written poem. I liked the formatting...A beautifully written poem. I liked the formatting, the fonts that make certain words/ phrases stand out, and especially I liked how this (the following) made me think, and nod my head:<br /><br /><em>My perceptions are distorted. Twisted.<br /><br />And it takes me a while to see past.<br /><br />And it takes a while to see past it.</em><br /><br />Thank you.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-111850089604071163.post-44582874760945318432010-10-21T16:16:15.500-07:002010-10-21T16:16:15.500-07:00it does take awhile to come through the other side...it does take awhile to come through the other side.Jaimehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09453433190266432905noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-111850089604071163.post-9060375498358373522010-10-21T11:38:57.471-07:002010-10-21T11:38:57.471-07:00Your words give voice to feelings that so many peo...Your words give voice to feelings that so many people can identify with. Good writing!<br /><br /><a href="http://panopticulated.blogspot.com/2010/10/when-circus-left-town-for-mag-37.html" rel="nofollow">My Magpie</a>Susannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-111850089604071163.post-19598231630092170412010-10-20T22:08:22.799-07:002010-10-20T22:08:22.799-07:00loved it. simply loved itloved it. simply loved itPriyanka Bhowmickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11658819351312019129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-111850089604071163.post-2429179291669597872010-10-20T22:07:15.794-07:002010-10-20T22:07:15.794-07:00It is some comforting to know that so many people ...It is some comforting to know that so many people understand depression. Thank you so much for your comments.Business IQhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03383555340302028043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-111850089604071163.post-78346336984392995872010-10-20T17:35:50.159-07:002010-10-20T17:35:50.159-07:00it does take a while...to get to fineit does take a while...to get to fineAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05088944123595868347noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-111850089604071163.post-42532646622803808042010-10-20T16:05:22.678-07:002010-10-20T16:05:22.678-07:00powerful and true...depression is the hardest thin...powerful and true...depression is the hardest thing to deal with ..only in sleep,in our dreams we can relax..nice endingUma Anandanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11529447615364043190noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-111850089604071163.post-22878764655940698872010-10-20T15:43:29.709-07:002010-10-20T15:43:29.709-07:00Depression, I've been there and dread its retu...Depression, I've been there and dread its return. So truthfully written, it does take awhile, doesn't it, to really "see" and move past...*https://www.blogger.com/profile/06484208765656281917noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-111850089604071163.post-35735691808761491852010-10-20T14:11:59.307-07:002010-10-20T14:11:59.307-07:00Great piece! Very moving.Great piece! Very moving.Reflectionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09655163868990155242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-111850089604071163.post-52926033803388200082010-10-20T12:14:55.439-07:002010-10-20T12:14:55.439-07:00So moving because it is so very real.So moving because it is so very real.The Blog of Beehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00650938872732748697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-111850089604071163.post-80960637735746716442010-10-20T12:06:28.583-07:002010-10-20T12:06:28.583-07:00Depression is not easy. I hope u will get the supp...Depression is not easy. I hope u will get the support u need 2 make it through.kathi harrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10966848441799595900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-111850089604071163.post-65655269635996838242010-10-20T08:57:32.134-07:002010-10-20T08:57:32.134-07:00This is a beautiful and too accurate portrayal of ...This is a beautiful and too accurate portrayal of depression. The false face we put on (even for ourselves), the time it takes to realize what's really going on, the weight and exhaustion of it.<br /><br />You captured it perfectly. I hope that in your journey you continue to make strides and have new insights such as this one.Witless Expositionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07455282931743006892noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-111850089604071163.post-26430408253521649512010-10-20T05:57:03.936-07:002010-10-20T05:57:03.936-07:00Dear PP: Depression sucks the soul from a person. ...Dear PP: Depression sucks the soul from a person. Time to reclaim once finding those depression triggers rooted often in the past reflections that never stop their impact on the present! Great poem!chiccorealhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16902834462795623856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-111850089604071163.post-30493502999556750162010-10-20T02:43:55.322-07:002010-10-20T02:43:55.322-07:00Movingly and succinctly put. I am impressed.Movingly and succinctly put. I am impressed.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-111850089604071163.post-10492809801887201842010-10-20T01:08:12.361-07:002010-10-20T01:08:12.361-07:00You wrote this so well ... Just tired. Run down......You wrote this so well ... Just tired. Run down...We are just…fine. all of it, really well done!Deborahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06231195313149947101noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-111850089604071163.post-78620642569411614652010-10-20T00:09:55.317-07:002010-10-20T00:09:55.317-07:00a feeling I can see into. So complex at times.a feeling I can see into. So complex at times.Isha Etherahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13078149456154457103noreply@blogger.com