10/31/10

Broken Laws

From Magpie Tales

Your words were
my commandments
They were the laws
of Who I Am

I gave them pure
acknowledgement
Until love
could at last condemn



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4 comments:

  1. ahhhh....this is such a sweet slice of 'pie. Eternal love, indeed. Lovely.

    ps.......I think the name of your blog is cracking btw!

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  2. Hi pp

    thank you for visiting my blog, particularly because it has introduced me to yours.
    Your magpie is excellent.

    I am happy to meet you and shall be back to explore.

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  3. I like that you saw the broken commandments tablet and ran with it! Great piece.

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