10/31/10

Broken Laws

From Magpie Tales

Your words were
my commandments
They were the laws
of Who I Am

I gave them pure
acknowledgement
Until love
could at last condemn



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4 comments:

  1. HelenaOctober 31, 2010 at 1:56 PM

    ahhhh....this is such a sweet slice of 'pie. Eternal love, indeed. Lovely.

    ps.......I think the name of your blog is cracking btw!

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  2. FrikoNovember 1, 2010 at 4:05 AM

    Hi pp

    thank you for visiting my blog, particularly because it has introduced me to yours.
    Your magpie is excellent.

    I am happy to meet you and shall be back to explore.

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  3. Tess KincaidNovember 1, 2010 at 4:07 AM

    I like that you saw the broken commandments tablet and ran with it! Great piece.

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  4. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallNovember 1, 2010 at 1:59 PM

    well put.
    love the metaphor.

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